Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Americans should not use guns


I think Americans should not use guns. They use guns in a really bad way. A month ago, there was crime scenery in America because of guns. This was a big issue all over the world. This was a big news issue in Korea as well. A lot of people over the world said negative things about this. A guy went to elementary school and killed the teacher, who died for her students. It was very sad. These crime scenes were caused by guns. Guns are used to scare and kill people in crimes and wars. Guns are never used in a good way. In 21st century there were many wars. To prevent these wars, even a punk rock band ‘’Green Day’’ make a song, ‘’21 guns’’ I will give you two reasons that why we should ban guns from America.

Guns make America scary. Because of guns, we can’t live safely. Whenever there is a bad news about guns, a lot of people will probably think ‘’Government should ban the gun. Government should do it. It is not my fault.’’ Everyone thinks like that but they never act. Therefore people never ban the guns. So some criminals keep their guns and use it for bad things. Police officers also have those little guns, but sometimes, bandits have even better guns than police and police gets hard to catch them. This makes America scary.

Next Guns make more crimes possible. Criminals might have guns and they can just go into a store and steal things with guns. As I mentioned before, police doesn’t have better weapons. So police might not be able to handle it. Criminals know this and they make crime much more possible. The news also said that there are much more crimes in New York than Korea. Even people in America have more possibility to die by accident. If one crime scene happens in Korea, no one probably will be dead. However if it happens in America, there is a higher possibility of people dying when there is a crime.

People who disagree with me might say ‘’ Well if government tries to take away everyone’s guns, will criminals hand them?’’ I think that if they ban selling bullets, no one will shoot guns in few years. OR they might say ‘’When should we start it? Since there is so many guns out there, it will be hard to make sure that we take all of them.’’ We should try our best, if we gets half of guns out there we would probably decrease half of crimes caused by guns.

Today I talked about why Americans shouldn’t use guns because guns make Americans scary and make crimes more possible.

2 comments:

  1. Donghoon,
    This is a very good essay. However, you should add some statistics to it to support your reasons. In the conclusion, you also need to summarize the main ideas of the previous paragraphs. Your conclusion is too short. Other than that, it was well-written.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Okay ^^ I'll get some more statistics next time~ Thanks^^

    ReplyDelete